Monday, June 4, 2012

sometimes even ninjas gotta surrender

Brace yourself.

The next couple weeks there's going to be a lot of pressure around the blogosphere to surrender. But don't be misled. I'm not suggesting that you give in.

Sometimes, surrendering means the exact opposite.

It means not giving up no matter what. It means doing anything and everything it takes to [reach your dreams, fulfill your potential, love with all your heart] be successful.

Will you surrender to your enemies? In the face of all the hurdles placed before you?

Or will you surrender to your greatness and reach for your dreams?

My friend--our friend--Elana Johnson has chosen to fight for what she believes in, to fight for her dreams.

Tomorrow, June 5th, her second book, SURRENDER, hits the stores. I've read it and it's awesome. I invite you to join with all of Elana's friends and wrap your arms around her and show her your support. Spread the SURRENDER news and enter to win a cornucopia of awesome prizes!

And stop by Elana's blog sometime this week and show a writing ninja some love!

Need a refresher on what happened in POSSESSION? Click here

About SURRENDER: Forbidden love, intoxicating power, and the terror of control… 

Raine has always been a good girl. She lives by the rules in Freedom. After all, they are her father’s rules: He’s the Director. It’s because of him that Raine is willing to use her talent—a power so dangerous, no one else is allowed to know about it. Not even her roommate, Vi. 

All of that changes when Raine falls for Gunner. Raine’s got every reason in the world to stay away from Gunn, but she just can’t. Especially when she discovers his connection to Vi’s boyfriend, Zenn. Raine has never known anyone as heavily brainwashed as Vi. Raine’s father expects her to spy on Vi and report back to him. But Raine is beginning to wonder what Vi knows that her father is so anxious to keep hidden, and what might happen if she helps Vi remember it. She’s even starting to suspect Vi’s secrets might involve Freedom’s newest prisoner, the rebel Jag Barque.... 

Saturday, June 2, 2012

druids & ireland & prizes, huzzah!

Dudes! I am the luckiest girl on the planet because I have the inside track to some of the best young adult novels in indie publishing. I loved Heather McCorkle's book THE SECRET OF SPRUCE KNOLL so of course I jumped at the chance to tell you about her newest book TO RIDE A PUCA.

Ya'll know how much I love Celtic stuff, which doubles my interest in this newest novel. And guess what? I have a Druid king in my family tree--how cool to read a book about the last of the Druids in ancient Ireland. I'm totally reading this book STAT.

Thanks to Heather for allowing my blog to be a stop on her tour and for the fun prizes she's made available to you!

Hi all, I'm honored to be stopping by Ali's blog to celebrate the birth of my new book, To Ride A Puca. I hope you got in on last week's giveaway and had a chance to win Ali's fantastic book, BECOME. Before we get to the goodies I'm giving away this week, here is a bit about the newborn. It is a young adult historical fantasy about the last of the druids in ancient Ireland. This one was a bit heartbreaking to write and because of that it became very special to me. I hope it will be to you as well.

Invaders are coming to take what isn't theirs, again.

Neala wants to stand and fight for her homeland, but as one of the last druids, she may be standing alone.

Persecuted, hunted down, forced to live in obscurity, the druids have all but given up. Can the determination of a girl who has barely come into her power bring them together? Or, just when she finally finds her place among her kind, will they end up losing a homeland their very magic is tied to?

Disclaimer: This novel contains some violence and difficult subject matter. It is recommended for mature YA and up.


Available in eBook and hardback at B&NAmazon, and other retail sites.


I’ll be giving away great prizes, a new one, every week for the next three weeks. This week I’m giving away a signed paperback of TANGLED TIDES by Karen Amanda Hooper. It is about a girl who finds herself tangled up in the underwater world of mysterious merfolk and secretive selkies. It is one of my favorite books of the year so far, trust me you’ll love it! The contest will be open until June 3rd, the winner to be announced on the 4th. To enter go to this link. Thanks for having me over Ali!

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Ah! Great prize--be sure to enter! Thanks for visiting Heather!

Friday, June 1, 2012

novel ninja melissa dean on engaging your readers

ENGAGING YOUR READER IS JOB ONE!

Hello everyone! Today, I wanted to talk to you about your critical first 50 pages.  It’s the section that editors and agents request the most and should be the most polished and intriguing.  There are so many things you must do to catch the eye of the publishing industry these days, but I want to focus on the first job of your first 50 pages. Engaging your reader is job one!

One way to engage your reader is by introducing them to a likeable character, the main protagonist. Someone the reader wants to spend the next 200 to 300 pages with daily.  If you look at books or even movies these days, you can probably see many characters who fit this bill.  Here are a few:

  1. Hero that defends the weak
  2. A principled hero (one that has a code of ethics/conduct)
  3. A sympathetic hero (He keeps trying, but can’t catch a break!)
  4. The Charming Hero (Like Capt. Jack Sparrow)
  5. The Resourceful Hero (Like Monk, Sherlock Holmes, Elle Woods)
Another way to engage your reader is through action.  Get your characters moving. Much like James Bond or the Mission Impossible movies, start with the characters engaged in some type of intriguing action. 
If your story world is about to change drastically, establish the normal in the first pages.  Show the character’s home, place of work/school, relationships to other characters while still hinting of change to come.  The best example of this I can give is The Hunger Games.  Katniss takes us through her normal daily routine while hinting about the Reaping to come later in the day.

To learn more about your First 50 pages, check out a fabulous writing craft book by Jeff Gerke, The First 50 Pages.  You can purchase it here.


About Melissa
Melissa Dean is a Fourth Grade Teacher and an unashamed book nerd.  She writes YA Paranormal Romance novels.  She is currently writing The Guardian Series.  Book one, SOLSTICE, is being queried to agents.  In her spare time, Melissa loves to sing and watch countless movies.  She lives in Schertz, Texas with her three dogs (Schubert, Potter, and Mozy) and her hubby, David.

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Thursday, May 17, 2012

lucky you! elle strauss has a new book!


I love new books and books by friends? Even better! Elle Strauss wrote CLOCKWISE and CLOCKWISER--she has an easy to read, fresh style that I think appeals to all readers. I certainly love them! Can't wait to read her latest book, a companion novel, LIKE CLOCKWORK.

To entice you more, here's some info and an excerpt! Yay!


Adeline doesn't feel she belongs in her own time, but can bad boys from the past be trusted?

Adeline Savoy had hoped that the move west from Cambridge to Hollywood with her single dad would mean they’d finally bond like a real family, but all she got was a father too busy with his new female friends and his passion for acting to really see her.

Instead she finds herself getting attached to Faye, the divorcee hair dresser she befriends when she travels back in time to 1955. Plus Faye has a hottie, James Dean-esque, bad-boy brother who has Adeline’s heart all aflutter. But bad boys from the past can be dangerous. Is it possible that Adeline really does belong in her own time and that maybe the right boy lives as close as next door?

LIKE CLOCKWORK is available now at Amazon and Smashwords for B&N, ibooks and other e-book retailers.

Read on to sample the first chapter:

Chapter One

Adeline Savoy


My dad still thought I was ten. That was how old I was when my mother died, and how old I was when my father crawled into his “cave,” also known as his office on the 26th floor of the John Hancock tower. Six years later, like a bear coming out of hibernation, Dad decided his days of hiding behind a desk were over. I thought he was going through a mid-life crisis, which was why we now lived in Hollywood instead of Cambridge. And why when I spotted his reflection in a mirror at the cosmetic counter in the Shop & Save store, I almost dropped the Scarlet Passion lipstick tester I'd just smeared on my lips.

Even though I was sixteen, I wasn't allowed to wear make-up. True. With my left hand I used a tissue to wipe the evidence off my mouth, all the while watching my dad’s familiar profile move in and out of range in the mirror.

He was laughing. I crouched down and turned, my vision just missing the counter top, and watched. His hair had grown out since the “decision.” He used to always keep it so short, that I didn’t even know it was wavy before, and the lines on his face never used to turn upward in a smile.
I had to see who was causing this cosmic reaction in my father. The clerk who sold cheap jewelry, a pretty-in-a-fake way brunette, tilted her head and giggled back.

My jaw dropped and something really strange started happening in my stomach. I felt a little sick because I couldn’t believe what I was witnessing. My dad was flirting!

Who was this man dressed in khakis, flip-flops and an un-tucked pseudo Hawaiian shirt? My real dad only wore pinstriped suits with starchy white shirts and a blue tie. Always. Even to bed, I was certain.

“Miss? Are you all right?” The cosmetic clerk was armed with a spray nozzle cleaner in one hand and a paper towel in the other.

I mimed as best I could, “ssh”, but apparently dad was the only one with acting skills in my family, since she wouldn’t leave me alone.

“Miss? You don’t look too good. Should I call for medical?”

The fake pretty lady stopped chatting when she heard her colleague talking so loudly. Obviously, that meant my dad’s little flirtation episode was over. And of course, my blonde ponytail was a giveaway. 

“Adeline?” he said.

“Dad!” I jumped up, feigning surprise.

“What are you doing here?” he asked.

What are you doing here? I thought. “Um nothing, just looking. Thought I might buy some gum.”

Dad glanced back at the fake and I did a quick switcheroo, replacing the tester and grabbing a sealed golden tube. It tucked nicely in my fist as I crossed my arms over my chest.

“Adeline, come here,” Dad said. “I want you to meet someone.”

My legs moved toward dad and the fake without my permission.

“Adeline, this is my friend from acting class, Spring. Spring, this is my daughter, Adeline.”

Spring extended her hand. Unfortunately, the contraband lipstick was in my right hand. I wasn’t a magician. Dad would notice if I tried to switch. I opted for the awkward offering of my left hand.

“It’s so nice to meet you,” Spring gushed.

“Same,” I said, not meaning it at all. “Not that I don’t want to stay and chat,” I added quickly, before Dad could draw us into more forced intimacies, “but I’ve got to go.”

“I’ll walk with you,” Dad said. But he wasn’t looking at me; he was smiling at the fake.

“It’s okay, Dad. I’ll meet you at home.” I strutted across the floor to the cashier. He glanced back at me as I stood in line at the register. I waved the pack of gum in the air. I paid for it and the lipstick while Dad and the fake went back to making googly eyes.

I snapped the gum in my mouth while caressing the lipstick tube in my hand. It was encased in a plastic protective seal, a perforated strip running the length of it like a zipper. My thumb picked at the rim. All I had to do was rip it open and it would no longer be returnable.

But I really should return it. I’d promised myself I’d give up the greasy lip habit when we moved. It was a chance to start over, do everything new, and be a proper daughter with a proper father.

Hrumph. Like that was turning out. Dad wasn't exactly holding up his end of the bargain.

My breaths came out short and rapid, like a panting dog. I didn’t realize how fast I’d been walking. I’d hardly taken in the tall palm trees that lined the road or the sweet smell of tropical flowers I didn’t know the names of.

No signs of autumn in sight. In Cambridge the leaves would be showing signs of turning color, bright reds and yellows. A little twist in my stomach. I was homesick.

And angry.

He was supposed to change, but not like that. He was supposed to notice me, spend time with me, not some flake called Spring. What kind of name was that anyway? It sounded like a made up actress name. Her last name was probably Storm or Wind. My thumb picked the plastic a bit more.

“Hi, there.”

I turned my head. Some guy riding a pink bike with a sparkly white banana seat and matching tassels that hung off tall, wide handle bars slowed down to keep pace with me.

“Hi,” he said again. This time there was no mistaking he was talking to me.

“Hi?” I said, not slowing down at all to do so. I may be entering my junior year, but I still didn’t talk to strangers. Janice, my babysitter/pseudo mom in Cambridge, had drilled that lesson into me good.

“My name's Marco. I live next door to you.”

Okay. I slowed a little. “Why are you riding a girl’s bike?” Did he steal it? Why didn’t he care about how stupid it made him look?

“It’s my sister’s. I sold mine to buy something else, but riding this is better than walking.”

“I’m walking and you’re not making any better time than me.” I was annoyed. Why didn’t he just keep going? I preferred to sulk alone.

“You’re new, so I thought with school starting tomorrow, you’d like someone to ride the bus with.”

Good point. Who knew what kinds of Hollywood weirdos would be on the bus? I looked Marco up and down. He was average height, shaggy hair, and wore a graphic t-shirt and surfer shorts with fat, loosely tied skate shoes on his feet. No socks. He had nice, tanned skin and warm brown eyes that squinted to almost close when he smiled. He wasn’t hard to look at.

And he looked trustworthy enough, I guessed. Plus, he was right. I didn’t really want to go to Hollywood High alone.

I stopped and turned to him. “I’m Adeline Savoy.” I wiped the sweat on my right hand off on my skirt—sky blue, slightly flared and to my knees—and offered it wanting to start my new friendship off on the right foot.

“Cool,” Marco said as we shook. “You like to make things official. I like that.”

The sun must’ve glinted off the gold tube in my other hand because Marco nodded toward it. “What’ya got there?”

“Oh, it’s just lipstick. I bought it, but now I’m not sure. I might take it back.”

“I don’t know why girls wear that vile stuff,” he said. I was surprised by the strength of his statement.

“It makes us feel good. Pretty. What’s wrong with that?”

“For one thing, you’re already pretty without it.”

He thought I was pretty?

“Besides,” he continued, “it’s made out of horse urine.”

“It is not! That’s so gross.”

“It is. That’s why it has that sticky consistency. Have you ever seen dried urine around a toilet?”

“You’re disgusting! How would you know about lipstick, anyway?”

“I have three sisters, though one is only six years old and hasn’t discovered the evils of make-up and this culture’s drive to sexualize young girls. It’s too late for my older sisters, but you can still be saved.”

Who was this guy? And how did he get off talking to me like that? He didn’t even know me. I felt my lips settle into a tight line and my pace picked up.

“Hey, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to offend you.”

How long was he going to walk with me? “Where did you say you lived?”

“Right next door to you.”

“Right next door?” This annoying person, who happened to be my only friend, lived right next door?

“Yeah, the two storey. My bedroom window faces yours.”

“You see in my window!”

“No. I don’t…” His face flushed red.

“You do, you do look in. You peeping Tom!”

“Adeline, I didn’t see anything. I just heard your music.”

“Huh?” I stopped and spun to face him.

A grin tugged at the corners of his mouth. “And your singing.”

“What?” I was mortified. He probably heard me singing along to  Feist, or even worse, he saw me doing my Michael Jackson impersonation. I bet he saw me doing the Thriller dance the other night. Ugh!

“Everyone can hear you. You have your window open.”

“You know what? Don’t talk to me.”

Marco seemed truly taken aback, and yet he didn’t get the hint. Not even one as direct as that. He was not only a peeper, but he was dense, too.

“I live in a house full of women. Three sisters and a mother. I get what’s going on here. It’s PMS, isn’t it?”

Was he kidding me? As if I would talk about something like that with him! I stopped and stared hard into his eyes. I produced my new tube of lipstick and slowly peeled the perforated strip, letting the plastic wrapper drop to the ground. I dramatically popped off the lid and twisted the base until the bright red dried horse urine was in full view.

Then I put it on my lips, slowly, purposefully, first the top and then the bottom, smacking them in Marco’s direction when I was done.

Take that, Mr. I Know Women.

Marco bent down, picked up the plastic wrapper and pushed it in his pocket. He straddled the bike and pushed off, turning back long enough to say, “I’ll pick you up at 8:10 tomorrow morning for school.”

Argh.

Friday, May 11, 2012

novel ninja amy mcbay!


Today kicks off the beginning of the new and improved Narley Ninja feature! It's been renamed to the more appropriate Novel Ninja and is held simultaneously here and at the dojo. The goal of the Novel Ninja is to introduce you to up and coming writers and to learn a little something about them--whatever they want to tell us. 

And how awesome we get to start the Novel Ninjas with our very own Amy McBay!

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Why write wolves? I love them. I’ve had dreams of wolves all my life, and usually the same black wolf with a little white patch on her chest. I’ve always had a very vivid imagination. It wasn’t until I was pregnant with my now two year old that I started writing her adventures down, and turning them into a novel. Most of the book came to me in dreams, and what didn’t I was able to fill in myself. I love visiting this reality I’ve made for myself, and one day soon I hope to share it with others. Maybe by the end of the year!

I’ve been writing for almost three years now, though only two of them as a serious writer intending to be published. I’m in the process of editing and having to learn as I go. I never expected to be a writer, it just happened, but it’s something I’ve come to love and obsess about.

I don’t just write wolves, I read them. Patricia Briggs writes some darn good werewolf books! I also enjoyed the Shiver series by Maggie Stiefvater, and of course Blood and Chocolate by Annette Curtis Klause, to name a few. 

I’m a proud military wife, a devoted mother of a beautiful daughter and adorable son, pack Alpha to two loving dog companions, and servant to an amorous cat. I was raised in a creative family, and excelled in art and graphics until my High School Graduation. Afterwards, I joined the Air force and served for four years until getting out to better care for my children.

I have always been a vivid dreamer and during the pregnancy of my son I started turning my dreams into a book. My world is full of werewolves, pixies, dragons, angels, demons, ghosts, and vampires. I’m a daydreamer, and a bit of a hermit, an artist, a bookworm, and a writer.  I’m opinionated, and honest. People have said I’m silly, odd, weird, a dork, a geek, and even a little crazy. They are right on all accounts. I am all of this and more. 


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Monday, May 7, 2012

growing up as an author

This past weekend I had a pretty powerful experience. Remember how in this post I admitted that I've been kind of ashamed of my book? Well, this weekend I sat on a self-publishing panel at the LDStorymakers Writer's Conference in Provo, Utah which meant I could sell my book in the conference book store and participate in the mass book signing.

The prospect made me super nervous because 1) this is a writer's conference peopled by many Latter Day Saint (Mormon) writers who might be offended by the journey my main character has to take and 2) the Storymaker community generally frowns upon self-published authors. The only reason I was able to sell my book was because I was a presenter at the conference. Anyhoo . . .

All of this adds up to a potential crisis situation of non-book-selling and shame. I could be judged (negatively) at every turn. This could be really, really bad.

The ali of two weeks ago would have been saying, "Well, my book isn't for everyone", like twenty-million times.

I'm proud (super duper proud) to say that I didn't say that once. In fact, I only said, "Thank you so much for the support. I hope you enjoy it!"

My display at the start of the conference.
I tried to show my book the love it deserves.
And . . . I sold twenty copies! There were only two books left in my display when I went to pack up!

People stood in line so I could sign their books.

People told me they loved my books.

And I looked them in the eyes and said, "Thank you."

By golly, I think I'm growing up!

One last word . . . My honey, David, took third place in the first chapter contest adult general fiction category! It was his first time entering any kind of writing contest and I couldn't be more proud of him!

I'm going to be working super hard at my writing job this week--for my writer-friends I wish you many thousands of awesome words and for my readers? I'm doing my best to give you a heart-wrenching, gut-twisting second volume in the Desolation series!